story help please

HEY GUIES TO GET OVER PAIN

I HAD A WHOLE BUNCH OF IDEA'S IN MY MINE

SO DO YOU THINK I SHOULD MAKE THIS TO A STORY??

 

FEATURING: ZELO, YOU, YONGGUK

TITLE: IN LOVE WITH A NOONA

 

ZELO: A BOY (18) WHO FELL IN LOVE HEAD TO TOE WITH YOU WHEN HE WENT TO YOU CAFE SHOP

YOU: A GIRL (20) WHO INHEIRTED YOUR PARENT'S CAFE THAT DOESN'T KNOW HOW TO REALLY SHOW FEELINGS

YONGGUK: A GUY (20) WHO BECAME THE SAME AS ZELO WHEN HE SAW YOU AT YOUR CAFE SHOP

 

YOU WERE HIRING PEOPLE FOR YOU CAFE SHOP. WELL NOT ALOT OF PEOPLE CAME ONLY TWO GUIES CAME FOR THE JOB. AFTER THEY CAME BUSINESS HAD BEEN BETTER WAY BETTER THAN BEFORE. WELL ONE DAY YOU DECIDED TO TAKE A LITTLE TRIP WITH THE BOYS. THINGS HAPPEN AND AFTER THAT YOU WERE LEFT CONFUSED ABOUT LOVE.

 

SOOOOO WHAT DO YOU THINK?? SHOULD IT BE FLUFF OR WHAT PLEASE HELP!!

 

THANK YOU AND SOME RANDOM SPAMS!!!!

 

lame spamer i know but i have to go to bed over ther is like 5 in the morning!!! something's wrong with my laptop

 

thank you!!!

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