My sudo fanfic

So if you guys saw my last post, you would know I was think about writing a sudo or any Suho couple fanfic. With that being said, would you guys mind reading some previews for me? 

 

 

PREVIEW #1

"Would you approve my relationship?" 

"No" 

"But hyung!" Kyungsoo whined to his older brother as walked into the the house with him. If anyone knew Suho, they would know he was over protective with his little brother, Kyungsoo. The last time someone bullied or touched Kyungsoo that they got sent to the hospital with a bloody and broken, assecorized with a black eye. So when ever his little brother would start to date ( which was rare to the fact he had a brother who could kill with a glare) Suho always had to approve.  

"Please hyung, I want you two to at least meet. Please?"

"Fine, but he does something, I can't promise someone won't get hurt" Kyungsoo face lot up hearing those words. 

"Thank you hyung!"

 

 

 

PREVIEW #2

 

Suho couldn't stand, remembering coming home last night walking in on his brothers boyfriend trying to take his innocence. His anger burned in his veins as he kept thinking about it. Soon jus thoughts if rage became impure as he thought about his little brother. How he should be the one to touch his brother like that, kissing him like that,holding him like that, the one to take away his innocence . Suho stopped himself in his tracks, did he actually just think; he was suppose to care for his brother not become his lover. He wasn't think about him like that, he was not thinking of his little brother his name as they're love. He was not in live with his little brother…..……

 

 

 

Was he? 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

PREVIEW #3

 

"Hyung~" Kyungsoo moaned out as his sensitive spots were touched. Pulling him I closer, wanting more if his touches and the heat that enveloped them as their bodies touched and intertwined with each other. 

"It's okay Kyungie, hyung will take care of everything" placing a small kiss on his lips, Suho prepared himself for something he never thought he do, take his brothers innocence.

 

 

Yeah so , that's it please comment, it would be greatly appreciated.

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fuwaoujou
#1
Wow it's ______? XD me likey!!!! Hope you start soon! ;)
VisualVolume
#2
I really like this! It's unique in my opinion because I rarely see Suho and Kyungsoo in situations like this, they're usually not related. Personally I don't normally read stuff like this but I really, really like this, these previews are good for previews too. Overall its nice and I like it a lot.I can sense it'll be awesome. :D