My Three Second Girl

Title: 4/5

I've heard and read lots of fanfics starting with 'My' and ends with 'Girl/Boy,' so yeah, but the second I looked at it, I thought of Love Rain, so its related and all that. Nice title, too.

Plot: 19/20

Pretty much similar to Love Rain, but I guess because it's kind of the point (what's with the title), I'm only deduction one point.

Grammar/Spelling: 13/15

Spelling=awesome. Grammar=pretty good, but not perfect. I spotted about 5-7 grammar mistakes.

Flow: 20/20

Practically perfect, as long as I know. You definitely made it clear it was another time or day, etc.

Forward/Description: 9/10

Great, except you didn't introduce the main characters, which I like, so minus 1.

Appearance: 8/10

It's kind of dull without posters, pictures, or a background. I suggest you get them somewhere! :)

Characters: 15/15

Perfect! You definitely showed who Jieun was, how Yoseob acted, etc., etc., and in a few chapters, you actually put in a lot of stuff about your (probably) main two characters without making it boring. That, to me, is a major feat.

Bonus: 5/5

I really, really enjoyed it. IUseob hardcore shipper, so I definitely liked it. Also, I absolutely LOVE Love Rain, so that was a great bonus. I've even subscribed! :)

Total: 93/100

Great job! In less than 5 chapters, you had me reading practically for my life! :) The best story ever (for me).