Hmm
It's a nice idea but it's not very well made, the chunks of the previous backgrounds clinging to their bodies make it look as if it was done without care. And whoever made it hasn't fixed the sizes of their bodies, it looks odd that Jiyong is so much bigger than Seunghyun.
Your story is really good, it deserves something better.
Sorry if this comment made me sound like a giant douche, but I took a class in web design and photo editing, and I just can't stand to see a poorly done job. It doesn't take much effort to fix these things, or to look up on the Internet how to fix them.

Like!!! Finally a look i can assocwith ji

omg that is how i pictured them in my head!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Woah!!!! Coool!!! Great work!