Seasons of Love ~ Opinions??

 

 

 

He was a murderer when I first met him.

He had no mercy. Or heart.

A person as cold as ice. As slippery as the snow.

 

 

 

 

She was a spring flower.

She was beautiful, and had no thorns.

She was Spring, and I the Winter.

 

 

 

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Earth has seven billion of habitants. On the same land there are tons of different people, landscapes, cultures.... However, there's something commum to all. Human's hability to love. Human's hability to fight. Human's hability to give up. In life you can be lucky or unlucky. You can follow your fate, or create a new one. Those are the two sides of life.

Youko is one of the lucky girls. Born in a good family, she is the dream of every parent. She's responsible, pretty, smart, and nice. With only twenty three years old, she is already an intern for a famous law firm. Her parents couldn't be more proud of her. Life gave her the best, and she chose the best as well.

On the other hand, Takeshi, also known as Ken, is the son of a very poor family. After dropping the studies, he immersed himself in a completely different world. The world where the unlucky ones make their path, the road that don't let them go back in time.

When the sides collide, it's supposed to be the end of the world. However, for them it was a new start.

 

 

 

 


 

~I really need some advice on this story :/ I'm writing it for a contest!!

And seriously... I want to update but I can't... Because of time and because I know nobody is interested on it :/

 

 

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mafalda
#1
It left me curious as to know how they will meet and how their future will be... Though this story seems more the 'serious' type, it really got me there! You should keep on writing, and post it, because I really want to read it!
Marianations #2
Babboom me wanna read :3