REVIEW: PRECIOUSMOMENTS

Title [20/20]:

I gave you full marks because the title gave us about an idea of what the story is like and the readers would like to find out more about it.

Poster [9/10]:

The poster matches well with the storya nd I know that the background is made by my unnie, milktea, right? XD

Description [9/10]:

The description let us know why Yuri doesn't believe in love again and also tell us what made her fall in love with Nichkhun. The only thing is that ...

Spelling/Grammar [8/10]:

You have a lot of wrong grammar or to say, puntuation, I notice that your grammar is very weak and sometimes you use wrong puntuation.

Characters [9/10]:

Obviously, the main characters are Yuri and Nichkhun and you also intrduced them perfectly well. ^^

Plot [25/30]:

The plot is original and also filled with love story. :)

Total [80/100]:

You obviously can see that you scored well but because of the grammar and spelling, you lose some marks, but fear not, your story is very good! ^^