Review for Kpoppin-Till-I-Die by exoticgrounds
A Bottle For Your Pain by Kpoppin-Till-I-Die
Title: 4/5
You're title caught my eye,it's not over used, and it gives a mysterious feel towards me.
Foreword/Description: 8/10
In the description I liked how it described Cho-Yi trying to forget Jonghyun. In the foreword however, that first sentence it didn't tell who her boyfriend was. But, since Key is a main character it should at least tell a little bit on how Key is or how he is towards the characters.
Appearance: 5/5
I really like the poster! It matches the story and gives off that dramatic feel to it. I like it.
Plot: 13/15
The plot has been over used. The abusive boyfriend and the kind girlfriend. But to be honest you've made the story quite unique.
Originality: 14/15
Besides the plot being used, I like how Cho-Yi is willing to keep up the relationship until she offically tells him. That's something I haven't seen yet. And I've never seen a writing style like yours, so it's pretty interesting.
Grammar and Spelling: 19/20
Awesome grammar skills! Except for that one line in Chapter 5
"WAIT,WOMAN!! IM NO SUPER MAN!"
Correction: "WAIT, WOMAN! I'M NOT SUPERMAN!"
And the basic "Youre" to "You're".
Characterization: 8/10
Jonghyun was perfectly described. But I was confused on how Key and Cho-Yi was. Cho-Yi wasn't described and Key was described in chapters 4 and 5 as an "umma" and is kind. Cho-Yi is a confusing character. I couldn't solve what kind of person she was.
Flow: 8/10
The beginning, it should have started with the date and how it happened. It couldn't start from the foreword and continue in the first chapter. Then explain that she was at the bar and met Key. Everything was rushed.
Overall Enjoyment: 7/10
The chapters were well written. Although the characters were not easy identified and was rushed. I enjoyed it. The plot is well explained in each chapter and never goes off-topic towards the story. I read all the chapters so far and enjoyed it.
Total Score: 86/100
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