ugh~! So one of our wonderful readers pointed out a mistake in our story. We were delighted of course but guess who has to go back and fix everything? >.< Stupid Channie sleeping! lol jk jk anyways I ended up fixing the foreword and first chapter of our story and then for kicks and giggles I decided to double check the rest of chapter 1 as well as the new chapter we posted last night....=_= I wish I hadn't. So those of you irritated by the mistakes PLEASE bare with me ^.^;; it's taking some time to fix it. Not to mention I'm sort of proof-reading everything again ^.^;; Sorry habit. Anyways keep looking forward to our story. I think you'll like what's coming up in the next chapter ;) Not telling what~