Just wanted to ask, what are your thoughts on my story? o.O

I mean, are the chapters too long, is the storyline not good, anything?

Just not if I could update faster please! I really do want to update fast, but if I do that I'll have to cut it into parts and well, i'm not really into that. I like to follow the chaptered way or something like that =))))))

Also, any ideas? comments? suggestions?

IT'S REALLY SO QUIET I FEEL LIKE I'M TALKING TO THE AIR....er, yeah ._.

COMMENT, NE? :DDD