Trying to write Action...what do you guys think?

So if you guys have been reading my EXONE, you probably know I'm going a little action-y. IDK, I don't like violence, especially if it's on TV or on movies.

But I recently watched City Hunter and man I seemed to be changed >.< Until I watch another great Korean Drama or Movie or something...

ANYWAY I just entered a writing contest with one of my oneshots, if you guys could read it and comment: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/164892/15/

Do I have a good hang of a really fast oneshot? IDK. Someone told me that and I'm like -shrugs-

THANK SO MUCH GUYS! LOVE YOU! <3 -blows kiss-

BTW I think the rest of the series is pretty good, although in the beginning I was trying to get the hang of it >.<

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leejinkioppa #1 Oct 29, 2012 18:08:03

I honestly don't like action/violence in movies or on tv but i like reading it... o-o is that weird? hahaha, I'll be going to read your oneshot now :)

jenuinelyjen #2 Oct 29, 2012 13:32:09

____TY HUNTER<333