WHAT?! : Review 

 

Title: 4/5

The title grabs your attention but it lacks some creativity. The title 'WHAT?!' may lead readers to wonder what the story/one-shot may be about but there's many stories out there with a similar title.

 

Description and Foreward: 9/10

I love the description and the foreward. They don't give out a lot of information about the actual story. 

 

Poster: 5/5

I love the poster! It gives the mysterious feeling for what the story is going to be about. 

 

Chapter Tiltes: 4/5

I like the title since there's only one. 'The Sweetest Jerk Around', it's not that creative which I deducted points for but, it doesn't reveal much about the actual chapter.

 

Plot: 17/20

I like the plot! BUT, as always again there's a slight lack of creativity. The love triangle is something that nearly every story I've read here has. Even though I have it in my own story as well, I'm trying to be creative about how the three way triangle is. You should try to do the same.

 

Flow: 7/10

The chapter got kind of confusing towards the end since when the talking happened, nearly none of the talking was labeled, so I didn't know who was saying what which is extremely confusing. The beginning of the story was great though!

 

Characters: 13/15

I like how the character's are portrayed since it's extremely clear. But the personality of the 2NE1 members, Big Bang and Suzy aren't really clear. You should have made the chapter bit longer so it's clearer to the reader. Also, there's no need to skip a line every time because it seriously takes up space which you could have used to portray the character better and the ending could have been better as well.

 

Font: 2/5

I absolutely hate the color of the font, I had extreme difficultly trying to read the oneshot. The font however is good, just the color is off. 

 

Grammar: 12/15

The grammar was good overall, but I still found some spelling and punctuation mistakes every here and there.

 

Enjoyment: 7/10

I enjoyed the beginning of the story but the end was too confusing for me to enjoy.

 

Total: 80/100

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