So, I actually read this fic for two days and I didn't know I would really enjoy it.

 

 The plot is quite strong and it isn't something that is forced.  For the plot, I'll give a 9.1/10. The grammar was flawless too (THANK GOD). I like how you use the secrecy and the uncertainty of the past to make your story a lot more colorful and interesting. You also gave justice to the "real" stories of your characters. Though, I think you can give some Minho some chance to unveil his story as well (That's if he isn't a boring, normal kind of guy). I also appreciated your narrative style and your major attention to details. Personally, I don't ship neither of the pairings presented in the story but since you're story is really good, I am somehow "compelled" to just read and read. I just hope your new character won't ruin it for me.

 

Good job! :D