Please Proofread my Assignment

 

Continuous Cycle of Breakfast
 
     Where are all the loudness that make you go deaf?
I wonder how many years it have been since I could sleep in and sleep this well without any disturbances. Namely, screams in my ear and bites on my arm. It’s dead silence in the house, those moments where a pin drop is a destruction to mankind. It’s never been this quiet since, well ever. It must be one of those rare occasions that there is no sound around here and neighbors don't come knocking at the door. Always smelly diapers, milks, cries, yells, laughters, bite marks, screams, etc. New baby is bad enough, not to mention twins. A girl and a boy. The wide eyed, rounded cheeks, and innocently cute face. That you just want to squeeze cheeks, give lots of kisses, and hugs all day long. Don’t let them fool you, they're psycho maniacs. 
After my daily morning routines, I went downstair to their "Kingdom" or the living room. Their sanctuary, full of toys, stuff animals, dirty diapers, spilled milk stains. I’m guessing I’m the one to clean this? I have a faint memory of already cleaning this. 
I came to the wall on the far end of the living room by walking, almost tripping over things to the calender on the wall. It's October 31st. Halloween season. They went to friends' house and practice "Trick or Treat" and use their innocent acts for people to load them up with lots of sugar. I rip out October 31st. It's my habit to rip the date today if I forgot to do it yesterday and rip out the date for tomorrow. I could not believe my eyes, October 31st. I keep flipping through the calender. Everyone of these dates, date the same day of October 31st. My eyes are probably just playing tricks in the morning.
I heaved a loud sigh and went to the kitchen. I don't why but I feel full. I know I can't get up during the middle of the night. It feels like I have already ate. Breakfast is the most important meal of the day. I heat the pancakes in the microwave. Then the thing I saw on the kitchen counter and my heart jumped out of my chest and truth to be told, I screamed like a 5 years old girl.
Their costumes, Pooh and Tigger from Winnie The Pooh. They were dressing up as their favorite stuff animals this year. It looked all tattered, battered, ripped up and stuffing came out. Full of dirts, and half of our city's soil on them. I reach my hand over and felt them. It was damp like a towel been soaked in hot water for too long. Then those déjà vu moments hit me. Those moments where you can't recollect but know that it happened before.
I immediately took the pancakes from microwave and stuff its burning content down my throat. Then took off to their room on the other side of the house. With my speed, I could probably been faster than Usain Bolt in the Olympics, barefooted. Which is ironic since I don't participate in any sports and and been called a "nerd."
The minute I reached the hallway that led to their room at the end of the hall. My visions are starting to be fuzzy, I’m procrastinating, heaving all my breathe with all my might. My feet sticks to the ground like cement. By then, my body broke its standing still and I came crashing down to the ground. Before I black out, and my brain went into deep slumber, I remember.
 
 

 
Thank q to all those who have read this. It's my English Assignment and plz leave in the comment below how it was. Thnk q so much.

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OhItsYing
#1
Doyoustillneedhelp? XD
uberchrome
#2
Uhm, first of all what's the topic all about?
give me details & I'll work with that. I'll comment the proof-read version and I'll give you some helpful tips (hopefully, you'll find them useful).
uberchrome
#3
GIVE ME TEN MINUTES OKAY. I'LL JUST TAKE A QUICK SHOWER AND GET DRESSED THEN MAKE A CUP OF COFFEE THEN BAM.
invicarious #4
It looks fine to me, Fishy XD