(ooc: Um...)
Okay first off...I was really shy and iffy about even posting this (even now I still don't know why I am posting this ;A; i keep trying to tell my brain to stop and it won't listen!! >///<) A-anyway...Umm I have a BIG BIG favor to ask and um..its okay if no one wants to help but uhm..I'm just putting it out there. Okay, here we go! /nervously fidgeting with my fingers/ ehh >.<
So..... just to keep this simple...I wrote a poem, for a contest held by Adam Lambert...and before I submit it... i want honest, as harsh as you can give me, advice on whether its good or not..I mean I let my close ones read it but I think they are telling me they like because they are afraid to hurt my feelings....and I don't want that, I want honesty! So um... if you want to read you could pm me..or comment and i'll pm in you the poem...
and you don't have to be nice!! i encourage you to be mean!! Haha, please I take critcism well xD I mean I want this poem to be good enough when I submit it, because it means a lot to me...it got nominated to be in a book but Adamn says i need to revise it...in which i did but now I want feed back from others so see where I need to improve, you know?
i'm sorry if this post annoys anyone >.< please don't hate me but if you can help me with this, I will greatly appreciate it...Thank you all! <3
Junai~
Comments