Title : From Base One

Author : chunjoe4evaa

Story Review by MinnieAh/Albino of ::Marshmallow Hedgehog::

Title - 3/5
The title doesn't really tells much about the story but it is engaging the reader. But after reading the whole story, I realised the meaning of the title~ ^_^

Foreword / Description - 7/10

The description tells the what is the story about but it still leaves a cliffhanger that will encourage the readers to keep reading~

Plot - 18/20

I could say that the plot is original because I don't see any story like this all around.

Grammar - 19/25

There are small mistakes here and there, like spelling and punctuations. There are also sentence construction mistake.

Flow - 6/10

I think some parts are too rush but there are still good transitions.

Enjoyment - 9/10

I really enjoyed the story in whole but I think that somewhere in the middle, the story is rushed through... *gets shot in the head*

Apperance - 5/10

If the font or colour can be changed to brighter colour, not neon or red colours, it would make the readers more interested to read about the chapter. The font is easy to read not like those who used cursive font.

Characters - 7/10

It is good that no characters went missing.

Total - 74/100

It was a good score and you can improve by editing your story~ Good luck ^_^

Small Note :

My first customer~ I lub you ^_^ LOL XD Kekeke!