Horror Story Test

 

After getting the message, Ryeowook started traveling in the forest. Once he reached his destination, he suddenly heard a voice that caught him off guard.
 
“Annyeonhaseyo” he heard a quiet voice call out.
 
Ryeowook looked to his left and found a girl sitting on the edge of the rundown wall. She had pale skin, almost as white as snow, and purple hair accompanied by deep purple eyes.
 
“Are you a wanderer? An explorer? Can you tell me?” the girl asked, her voice light as a feather.
 
Ryeowook stared at her for a few moments before replying, “I’m actually looking for someone…” He took a deep breath, “Have you seen him?”
 
The girl’s expression did not change, “What does he sound like?”
 
“He has a deep melodic voice and tends to talk in weird sentences… and his name is Yesung” Ryeowook described with a worried tone.
 
“So his name is Yesung…” the girl muttered, “Which means, you must be Ryeowook”
 
Ryeowook suddenly froze, “H-How do you know my name?”
 
“Yesung kept saying that name.” The girl simply replied, “He said: ‘I need help.’ ‘Help me Ryeowook’ ‘Come here as fast as you can, Ryeowook’ ‘Ryeowook, save me’”
 
Fear was evident in Ryeowook’s eyes. After he tried to calm down, “Well… may I know your name?”
 
The girl tilted her head to the side, “What’s a name?”
 
“If you don’t know what a name is… then that means you don’t have one” Ryeowook pondered.
 
The girl seemed confused, “Are you going to give me a name?”
 
“Well… I don’t know what to call you” Ryeowook said.
 
“There’s no need to call me anything” the girl replied. “Besides… don’t you need to find this Yesung person?”
 
Ryeowook nodded and continued walking toward this castle. “What are you going to do?”
 
The girl didn’t reply and left Ryeowook alone. He traveled inside the castle-like building in hopes to find Yesung. He found himself inside the lobby area where there were many porcelain dolls that looked very similar to the girl that he encountered earlier.
 
“What is this place?” he muttered to himself as he decided to explore more.
 
He then went upstairs and found a few rooms. Most of them were locked but the one that caught his eye was the one at the end of the hall that had a note on it.
 
The note says: Would you like to play a game?
 
Being the curious person he is, Ryeowook tried the door and found that it was unlocked. The first thing he saw in that room was a figure lying on the bed, motionless.
 
As he moved closer to the figure he realized it looked awfully familiar. He stood there frozen once he knew… that it was Yesung.
 
“What’s going on?” Ryeowook warily muttered.
 
Ryeowook steps back in fear but he suddenly felt a presence behind him. He turned around and saw the girl from earlier but she had a different aura around her.
 
She never moved from her spot and Ryeowook seemed worried. On instinct, he ran out of the room as he pushed her out of the way and tried to escape the castle.
 
As he reached the doors, they suddenly shut and locked on him. He tried his best to open them, but no prevail.
 
He turned around and was startled by the girl that was within a few meters from him.
 
She smiled forebodingly, “You shouldn’t have done that…”
 

 

Well... tell me what you think! I was deeply inspired by reading a few creepypastas and decided to act upon this inspiration.
 
If you like what you see, please let me know. I'd be happy to make a full-fledged horror fanfic. Constructive criticism is welcome as well. It'll help me improve the next time I attempt this.
 
See you next time!
 
Currently listening to: Song of Unhealing
 
 

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mellissa
#1
I like it very much ^^
I love horror fics and I've been looking for one.
I hope you'll make this fic!!
Because I'm loving it so much!!