Epic Fic Challenge #1

 

Got it from Kay_tea114 here.

 

Fic title: Writing on Airplanes 

Genre: Tradegy and Romance

Pairing (if any): Heechul/Krystal (pedo alert), Minho/Krystal (I DON'T EVEN LIKE MINSTAL)

Rating (if you had to guess): G, PG, PG-13, R, NC-17...

Total Number of Words: 2, 548

Status (completed, ongoing, abandoned): completed

Subscribers, Views: 7 subs, 384 views

Type of fic (series, oneshot, two-shot, drabble, songfic, etc.) twoshot

 

Why did you write the fic? It was for a contest that I'm probably not gonna win.

Inspirations? About a year ago, I was utterly heartbroken from this guy who already had another girlfriend and slammed me down to the ground with his rejection (oh my god, this sounds like the plot of another cliche romance fic on AFF). So, during the summer, I wrote a series of very very long notes on one single piece of paper describing my feelings for him.

(...wow, I used to be a really naive, desperate little )

Then I looked back on it and suddenly thought, "Hey, I could make a good story out of this" for some really odd reason.

Did you like it (because some do not tbh): Not my best, but...sure.

Dislikes: How Heechul died. I mean, he got beat up. Beat up to death. When I think about it now, not only is that super uncommon but also kinda creepy to think about it too. And then Krystal just walks away from it as if she's not still a few feet away from it and she's not aware of Heechul's pleading screams for help. 

I also don't like how Heechul had an obsession of flying and airplanes and anything that had to do with flying and airplanes. It went up to the point where he said goodbye to Krystal using a note written on yes, a paper airplane. Kind of a weird goodbye to me, and not really heartfelt.

Plus, some of the stuff Krystal wrote on the airplane make me shiver in disgust. For example, she writes that she is still fully in love with Heechul after three freaking years. Loser.

Likes: How Krystal moved on with Minho, and how she says a final goodbye to him in the end without her crying buckets over him after eight years. 

 

...Yeah.

Any ideas that you scrapped? Not that I remember.

Any ideas did you add as the fic goes on? When Heechul sees Krystal for the first time in like, three years. And right before he dies. Because what better way to spend your last few seconds than seeing an old loved one that took you a ING LIFETIME for you to remember them?

Any special message/theme? Uhh....obsessing over airplanes is really weird and unattractive? LOL

Rewards (fanarts, featured on AFF, mentioned on Tumblr/Facebook/others, etc.) pft no

Any fond memories when writing it? Not really. Oh wait there's- nah, never mind.

 

Favorite scenes? The ending.

Scenes you wish you didn't write? Some of the notes on the airplane.

 

Did this fic teach you anything? (insert reflection here LOL)

I'm not very good at making the death of a loved one very dramatic. OTL

 

 

 

yeah, I did this at  like midnight so i'm really grumpy and bitter and stuff like that  ._.

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