this isnt a fan fiction :( but i want to know you guys think of it anyway so PLEASE~~~~ comment :)

Plot: Annaleisa Braun is a 17 year old German girl, belonging to the family of Nazi's. One of the many few in the year 2012. Annaleisa (commonly know to friends and family as Anna) disagrees with her family and their views, however she dare not tell them how she feel. She has been learning and teaching herself English without her parents knowing, and decides to better it. One day, Anna decides to find a friend to confide in. This is how she meets Kobayashi Hiroki.
Kobayashi Hiroki is a 19 year old Japanese university student studying English. Part of his course is to find someone overseas who will continue to write to Hiroki in English, and this is how he meets Annaleisa.

  “And now, I want everyone one of you to go home, befriend a foreigner and write to them. In English. Go home.” Professor Sato spat angrily at his class. Hiroki gathered his texts books, novels and poems, and slid them into his backpack. He smoothed some hair out of his face, and bowed to his university professor. Leaving the building, he walked home, whistling contently.
When arrived back at his home, he logged onto the computer and began searching for people to mail overseas. He frowned as the usual kept appearing (40 year old American men, wanting to talk ally as their wives are boring) but one name caught his eye. Annaleisa Braun. He read her biography and smiled. A 17 year old German girl, English is quite well, and wanting a friend to talk to. Hiroki sent her a quick email asking if they could become friends, and smiles. Job done.

this is all I have at the moment but please please please tell me what you think :)