Title 3/5

Appearance 2/5

Poster looks cliche and oldish.

Description and Foreword 8/10

The English 32/35

Very good English and wide vocabulary.

Mistake:

Maybe I'm just not relationship material - relationship's

Plot 10/20

Arrangement 25/30

In chapter 2 you don't have to change the font size.

Originality 8/10

Girlxgirl and love triangle, often used. 

Viewer's comment 5/5

Overall: 93/100