Review for Junghwaaaan
Reviewed by Nicole
Title (2/5)
The title is not that attractive…
Poster/Trailer (-/5)
Let’s leave this blank
Foreword & Descriptions (7/10)
You did a great job here… Keep it up..!
Originality (7/10)
It’s quite original to me…
Writing Style (7/10)
Suspense...
Flow (7/10)
A good flow indeed
Plot (15/20)
Love the plot!
Grammar & Spelling (18/20)
In the description, there’s a slight mistake… Maybe by saying I continue to love the vast blue sky, “I continued my journey to love this vast blue sky”
In the foreword,
Childhood friends… that was what they were. Best friends… that IS what they are NOW. Lovers… that IS what they WANT to be IN THE FUTURE
And… It’s raining now, a perfect mood for an angsty one-shot…
In chapter 1, there are a few mistakes here and there… Well overall you’re good!
Ending (7/10)
Sorry, I don’t really like sad endings… Especially Donghae died…
Total: 70/95 = 74/100
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