Guise.... Guise.... seriously.....
Kim ( _____ )
Lee ( ______ )
Or _______ stepped into the spotlight blah blah blah.....
These things right here. I don't like it. As in I don't.
It isn't right.
Instead of doing this _______, use The Second-Person's point of view to write YOU fictions, or just simply make an OC character.
_______ <-------- This is just..... makes me want to.....
Example of the Second-Person point of view YOU fic? Sure... Why not....
Warm fingers glides through your hair, combing it delicately while he hums softly in your ears, “Wake up, sleepy head…”, he says before kissing the top of your head, wrapping you safely around his arms every morning before you wake up, cradling you in his arms like a baby and waits patiently until you wake from your slumber.
“Ten more minutes…”, you answered back, turning around to face him just to lean against his strong chest. You heard him giggle a “No”, bringing a pout to your lips but still he doesn’t shake your body to awareness.
He kissed the top of your head again, “Get up now you big baby…”, he whispers gently, and this time you whined but managed to push yourself up with a yawn, rubbing both eyes with the back of your hands, you felt a shift on the other side of the bed as he gets up, hands reaching out to you and you hold it firmly as he pulls you up.
Now let me differentiate and use this _____ sorcery.
Warm fingers glides through ______'s hair, combing it delicately while he hums softly in ____'s ears, “Wake up, sleepy head…”, he says before kissing the top of ______'s head, wrapping her safely around his arms every morning before she wake up, cradling her in his arms like a baby and waits patiently until ______ wakes from her slumber.
“Ten more minutes…”, ______ answered back, turning around to face him just to lean against his strong chest. ______ heard him giggle a “No”, bringing a pout to ________'s lips but still he doesn’t shake her body to awareness.
He kissed the top of _____'s head again, “Get up now you big baby…”, he whispers gently, and this time ______ whined but managed to push herrself up with a yawn, rubbing both eyes with the back of herr hands, _______ felt a shift on the other side of the bed as he gets up, hands reaching out to ______ and she held it firmly as he pulls _____ up.
What's better, using you or _______.
If you can't use the Second-Person, please just write about an OC character.... I BEG YOU!
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