Review for darling-dreamaholic
My 101 Plans to Get Her by darling-dreamaholic
Reviewed by Imz
Title: (8/10)
Eye catchy but it doesnt fit the story that much, know why? Your title gives this kind of plot: Baekhyun will do his 101 plans to get stubborn Hayee's heart, something like that but in your story, it didnt actually happen did it? It was Kai's plans it wasnt 101 either, just because it sounds cool?
Appearance: (4/10)
Appearance: (4/10)
You just got the bg somewhere right? as for the poster, it should be a little more fun and bubbly.
Description and Foreword: (12/15)
Originality: (7/10)
Flow: (7/10)
I think it's too slow, the flow only got going when Luhan was there
Grammar, Spelling and Punctuation: (13/20)
I understand English isnt your first language but there are ways to know if it's right or wrong.
Characterization: (9/10)
Writing: (7/10)
Confusing. You hardly know who's POV is whose
Bonus: (3/5)
Total: (70/100)
Imz' note:
You should organize your paragraphs more, not that it's not organized but a little less confusing. I kinda like te story anyhow :)
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