Review for shineesunflowers
The Doll With Ramen Hair by shineesunflowers
Reviewed by Imza
Title: (9/10)
it was eye-catching and the first thing I thought of was Zelo and I was right XD
Appearance: (4/10)
its fine I guess, but your first chapter emits a scary aura so it should have been darker, it was fluffy too but it shouldve been kinda scarier
Description and Foreword: (13/15)
Originality: (9/10)
I think this isnt the first time I read something like this
Flow: (9/10)
Grammar, Spelling and Punctuation: (20/20)
Flow: (9/10)
Grammar, Spelling and Punctuation: (20/20)
very good :)
Characterization: (7/10)
Writing: (9/10)
Writing: (9/10)
neat
Bonus: (4/5)
Bonus: (4/5)
I have to say, I enjoyed it
Total: (84/95)
note: It's a good story :) actually I got scared at first cos I'm really a scaredy-cat but it turns out to be fun. hwaiting! :)
Total: (84/95)
note: It's a good story :) actually I got scared at first cos I'm really a scaredy-cat but it turns out to be fun. hwaiting! :)
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