Review for yummy_cupcakes
Does He Love Me? [OneShot] by yummy_cupcakes
Reviewed by Nicole
Title (2/5)
The title is quite normal…
Poster/Trailer (-/5)
Well since there’s no poster, I’m going to leave this empty
Foreword and Descriptions (7/10)
You did well here… A few spelling mistakes here…
Originality (7/10)
It’s actually quite original to me… Good job
Writing Style (7/10)
Your writing style is unique… Keep it up!
Flow (6/10)
The flow is okay… Try improving it…
Plot (15/20)
I love your plot… Great job
Grammar and Spelling (17/20)
Well… The grammar is okay but there’re a few spelling mistakes here and there… Not a big deal…
Ending (8/10)
Well, I love happy endings… A bonus for you!
Total: 69/95 = 73/100
B : 60-74
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