So, I have only one asignment left for english this semester, and Right now my grades are depending on this story. Thanks to my little not-so-cheaty-cheat with 2NE1´s lyrics I raised my grades to an A, but if I get an B or higher on this last asignment I will get a A+ in final grade!!!! (oh yeah, oh yeah, im feeling good! lolz ;D)

So the asignment is to write a short story about... well anything =) And I wrote one about love.... well... Okay I realize I totally got inspirerd by Baby Im sorry by B1A4. but really you cant call this one cheating!!!! I havnt even copied the lyrics ONCE!!! =) Please help me and tell me if you think I should change anything, and hopefully fast (I have to turn it in 10am tommorow, wich is in 18 hours and 21 minutes) ;) Thanks =)

Story: --------> http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/138214/4