Ice Cream Soda Pop by Kosianfanfics

Reviewed by Imz

Title: (8/10) 

- fluffy and tasty

Appearance: (7/10)

- no poster, the background is cute though add a poster :)

Description and Foreword: (14/15)

Originality: (8/10) 

Flow: (6/10)

- slow

Grammar, Spelling and Punctuation: (18/20) 

Characterization: (6/10)

- no characterization in the foreword and you just get to know them naturally as the story goes

Writing: (7/10)

- some POV's were confusing, the colored texts cheered me up a bit :)

Bonus: (2/5) 

Total: 76/100

Imz' Note: Keep it up! Add more lovey-dovey scenes to it, more competition and jealousy I guess it will turn out great :)