Review for ilamby
A Crazy Little Thing Called LOVE by kloyola
Reviewed by Minzy
Title: 3/5
It's not that catchy,cause I have read some story with the same tittle.
It's not that catchy,cause I have read some story with the same tittle.
Did you do it yourself? And the crown and specs at GD and Dara was weird, the words are confusing since I didn't know to read the bottom or sides first. The background are just loves so it's simply simple.
Description/Forward: 8/10
It's not something that drives me wanting to read,but some I do want to know what happens next cause of it's cliffhanger.
Characterization: 5/10
You don't describe all of them,so I had to follow the flow and had to sum it all up for their characters personalities.
Plot: 9/15
Plot: 9/15
Since it's based on a movie,it's slightly does not amazed me to much.
Flow: 10/15
You're not rushing or a little to fast,it's just nice.
Grammar & Spelling: 21/25
Grammar & Spelling: 21/25
At the very beginning of the 1st chapter you have some mistakes in grammars
1st Chapter : ........is talking about there ideal type of guys
........is talking about their ideal guys
Bom: I'd like someone who can only loves me.
Bom: I like someone who will only loves me.
Daesung: I like woman who likes me and is understanding of my career
Daesung: I like woman who likes me and understand my career
Well other than chapter one you only have some mistakes in the last 3 chapters. Spelling is great,no mistakes ^_^
I understand what your writing.
Enjoyment: 4/5
Enjoyment: 4/5
I enjoyed it,but since there's some grammars mistakes,my brain to work while reading it,meaning have to correct it.
Bonus: 4/5
I ship DARAGON so much so Bonus Marks for you ^_^
Overall: 70/100
The reds one is mistakes and under them are corrections.So you got 70% and I even subscribed :) Tell me when you had done Crazy Little Thing Called Love 2
Minzy's Note: Sorry if I'm to harsh -bows-. Since it's my first request I try to be as kind as possible but the results are still ...... Anyways tell me when there's a sequel :D
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