Okay guy I really need some help.

So I made a simi new fanfiction but I haven't gotten any veiws. I was wondering if you guys could help me out by reading it and giving me suggestions on it.

The story is called "your not mine to keep" please read if you are willing to help me and then message me or comment under the story saying what you think about it.

Thanks ☆*:.｡. o(≧▽≦)o .｡.:*☆