Yukisticky - Here's my kind review by ll0vex3_her @Starbright Designs! :D I was expecting a much lesser score since I'm honestly not very good at well...let's face it, writing. But I"m working on it! :D

 

 

 

Ai_Dami review

 

Title:  4/5

Nice title! I never heard anyone putting such titles up! So good job! I really love the title!

 

Poster(If there is one): /15

None, don't worry, I won't count the marks in.

 

Description:  6/10

I love your description, there's a certain mood to it that caught my attention. I wish to continue reading it~!

 

Forward:  7/10

I love the feel you gave in your forward. It gripped my and made me want to continue reading. Such forwards are easy to get the readers attention, and in this case, it surely got mine! xD

 

Character descriptions (only if have one):  /10

Plot:  20/45

The plot is nice. No, not very original, but its still those drama that anyone would basically like to read. Its nice and well, I feel sorry for the girl. Why did Kibum only visited her once after the first visit? But then, its ok. ((:

 

Writing:  17/40

Your writing style is quite complicated. Somehow I have a feeling that it jumped scenes. But overally everything is okay. Except that some places are really confusing!

 

Spelling/grammar:  16/25

Basically everything is ok. Nothing much to say about it. Although sometimes your sentences really needs some changes.

 

Chapter titles (only if have titles):  /10

None, don't worry, I won't count the marks in.

 

Ending (only if completed):  8/20

The ending is actually quite complicated. I can't really be sure if the girl died or not. Because you said the girl walked into His waiting arms yet the stars heard her wishes. So...did she die or did she not die??

 

Rated scenes (only if rated):  /10

None, don't worry, I won't count the marks in.