Does anyone have any suggestions for me to add to Can't Live Without You?

This is my first fanfic and I know I probably so please help me by giving me some constrctive critiques sbout my work. Also, I've hit a writer's block so if you have any suggestion about what you want to happen just msg, wall post or comment. 

Please support my fanfic although the chapters are short they should seem more like a script to a movie. 

 감사합니다-- thank you!

♥ Riri