Feedback please?

I have been writing for some time now. And I have also read quite a number of fanfics on AFF.

Frankly speaking, I hated my limited vocabulary in English which restricts my way of expressing my ideas or scenarios. OTL

 

And sometimes, I would imagine how some of my readers would cringed upon reading my fanfic because it sounded quite lame...  Haha

Therefore, I hope that I can have some feedback for the questions.

 

1) Do you think I should continue using 'you' as the main female character? Should I give her a name? Do you like it to be your own account name?

2) Should I continue including Korean romanisation in my fanfic? Like 'Saranghae' or 'oppa'?

 

 

^ I included this in my fanfic because I thought it would make my readers feel that 'they are the main characters and they are in Korea'. Moreover, I find that most of the stories I read in AFF has done this too. LOL

 

I don't know... :/

Any idea?

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angel_bluesky #1
Don't give this much thought. When you write something just try to imagine what you truly wanna xpress or what words sound better with the situation. some korean words actually don't go well with story or just too cliche and some eng words just don't seems realistic. And about the character,can you decide which one you comfortable with? if u hving trouble, try to decide is the personality of the girl too distinct that you hv to give her a name or not. not sure if you will read this but yeah..you're the writer. just because a readr doesn't like OC or 'you', it doesn't mean others feel the same as well. I'm gonna read your stories no matter what. if your stories turn real bad then i'll inform you keke <3
tatiana #2
don't change anything :) it's fun reading it the way it is :)
--minyoungiie #3
I like ur writting now,its so easy to understand ^^,em I don't think u need to changed anything,ur writting is best just the it is!If you want to add a name its okay,Im fine with it ^^,
JiaHuey #4
I like ur current way of writing... ur way of writing is one of the reason why i love ur fics... <3 bout the name, you can use 'you' or give her a name..i dont really mind.. :) but bout the korean romanisation, i hope you can continue using it.. ^^ *thats my opinion*
HyunYoungPark #5
just write as usual. i like the way you write. so, its up to you.
forever2323 #6
i like how it is...dont change!!!!!!! XD continue writing new awesomeh fanfics...
harakey96 #7
i love your current way :))
smileysgoboing #8
I disagree with both:
1) Using the account name makes it sound so...random and awkward. I recommend giving her a name, or just avoiding the name entirely (a good example of this is Bad Pet, which is the current featured fic). Please don't use ~~~~~
2) There's nothing wrong with using Korean, but I don't recommend it (unless you actually speak Korean). It's so overused, and sometimes it's just weird. Using English can be a lot more effective in most situations. For example, 'I'm sorry' can sound more meaninful than just 'mianhe'.
Anyway, that's just my opinion.
shy-gurl #9
I LIKE THE WAY YOU WRITE YOUR STORIES. DONT CHANGE IT (: They like how you write your stories if not why do you have so many subscribers? Write the way you want to write it. Be yourself :D
adlinriz #10
1.you can use you cause sometime i don't make the lead female as me
2.sure but the word that most of the people know
kaisoo77 #11
If you use OC character, it'll be better though. It feels weird reading when suddenly your username pops up. haha
about korean words, nevermind using them. I'm used to it
Jun_Hee #12
1. I usually read that without names.
2. You can use Korean words.
lethargic #13
1. Well, it's actually fine making a OC name or the 'you' tag; I'll always be reading it ;)
2. Well, it's up to you unnie (; but I kind of like it, it could make my korean language improve hehe

Hwaiting on your stories btw unnie hehe
NoBodY_KnoWs_Me #14
1. you should continue using you as the main character
2. you should do anything you want is your story!
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