Reread my story that I started in the 9th grade...back then I thought it was really good, yeah there were things that needed to be fixed and needed more detail, but I still thought it was good...now I think it wasn't that good. I still am improving my writing..well at least trying to improve it. The main things I'm trying to improve are to not change from past to present within a chapter or story unless it's a flashback or like a dream and to be more detailed. For some reason I have difficulty being descriptive sometimes, which is crazy lol, I can picture how something or a character looks, but for some reason there are times I find it hard to put in words :/ It seems that I can only write good descriptions when the words come to me.