Love (poem)

I found one of the poems I've written years ago and thought I should share it here... just because ^^

Somehow by looking at the poems I wrote before, I can recall feelings and ideals... compare the who I was then and who I became now... its kind of eerie trying to discover who I was back then but whatever I did or felt then morphed me into who I am now so I suppose all is good.

Enough talk though... here's the poem I wanted to share...

 

Love is something we cannot live without

yet it is something we wish we have never known

it can be full of laughter, full of thrill

yet full of hurt and pain you'll feel

 

It hits you like a thief it the middle of the night

You'll wake up feeling you have been cheated and knocked out

It strikes like a bullet in the pit of your being

you will not know it hit you till you are left bleeding

 

It can make you feel happy

it can complete your soul

But that is only if you found someone who will hang on

through thick and thin

 

But once you got the wrong person

That is when the suffering begins

It hurts more than you ever can imagine

more than what you can take

 

You will wish you never felt that feeling

Wish you never cared

Prayed the hurt to just go away

Leave you back to your quiet place

 

Haven't you even given a single thought

You wouldn't be as strong as you are today

If you hadn't loved and been hurt

The way you had been

 

Just to remind everyone, I am not a professional and I did this when I was younger than I am now so its pretty amateurish...

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YukiCiel
#1
thanks... ^^ I'm glad you liked what I wrote
RaspberryTaffy
#2
WOAH ur good :D<br />
U may not be professional....but a poem written like that could win a prize!!! :D
YukiCiel
#3
I'm glad you liked my poem ^^ <br />
I probably may have been heartbroken when I wrote that but I cannot remember anymore :P
Anne60
#4
It is a beautiful poem...and yes well said..and written.<br />
One cannot write one without really feeling for it...and that what it says here...And what is in here is quite...tis true tis true...<br />
To some might be amateurish..but it comes from the gut as one may say it is...and yes I can feel it...LOL and I like it...