SHINe Article

Araso.

so how does this sound like to you guys,

saying that this is the SHINee article

for my school newspaper???

and they are being featured and shared to everyone!

so please read and tell me what you guys think, please!

*begs with puppy eyes and pouts*

 

            Being one of the top Entertainments in South Korea, SMent’s SHINee is one of the best boy groups to have come so far. SHINee is a South Korean boy group that debuted on May 25, 2008 with their hit single “Noona Neomu Yeppo” –Noona, You’re so pretty-- or also known as Replay. The group is consist of 5 members—Onew, Jonghyun, Key, Minho, and Taemin. Throughout the hardworking years as a group, SHINee had released three full lengths albums, three mini-albums, and various singles of their own along with sound tracks for Korean dramas. They had recently debuted in Japan as a Japanese Pop group on June 22, 2011. SHINee had also been featured on various Korean reality shows and starred in their own too.

            The name SHINee means “the one who is in the light” or spotlight. SHINee is a contemporary group who fits into the world trends such as music and fashion. SHINee attracted so many fans around the world with their fashion that people starts calling it the “SHINee Trend.’ Their songs are also so popular that they had won over 18 awards over the courses of their career beginning with M! Countdown with two songs, Music Bank with four songs, and Inkigayo with five songs. Some of the songs winning two awards in a short amount of time. SHINee is set to have a comeback some time in April and releasing a new album. Many ShaWol—fan supporters-- are looking forward to their release since teasers had been coming out about them for months.

            ShaWol are proud of the hard working guys for their hard work and dedication to their fans out there in the world. One proud ShaWol, minute19, proudly states, “They are amazing and not only do they work their butts off but they work great together. They are best friends and people worthy of looking up to. They have amazing voices and each works hard to make the group great.” ShaWol supports them, not just because of their looks, but because of who they are. SHINee vocalist, lead rapper, and lead dancer Key once said, "My dream isn't to be the best, it's to be someone I'm not ashamed to be.” They work hard and don’t like to let others down. SHINee leader and lead vocalist Onew said, “You cannot appreciate the beauty of the sky at night without these five shining lights” as he refers to s. The five shining SHINee boys are said to be like a family. Their friendship to one another warms the heart of ShaWol.

            So, if you still haven’t check out SHINee by now, I recommend you do. These boys sounds like a group to be liked by many.

 

I know it sounds horrible and because i cnt be too bias i cant really show the school my love towards them.

but this was the best i can do and i really need advice on how it is!

because to me, i can go on forever

but because of being too bias, i cant and now it sounds EH!

so please oh please tell me how it sounds like! :)

thank you

-starlove

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coercion #1
It's good. ^^
But I think cute.
HOW DID YOU GET APPROVAL TO GET SHINEE IN YOUR NEWSPAPER? EKK!
AlmightyBlingBling #2
OMG unnie r u srsly srs dat it's gonna be in ur sch newspaper ?! O.O
WinterRose
#3
"ShaWol are proud of the hard working guys for their hard work and dedication to their fans out there in the world." ---> Saying that we are proud of our hard working guys is enough. No need to add in the "for their hard work" part... Makes it sound redundant. I think it is so cool that you are able to introduce SHINee to your school and I hope the article goes well. Definitely check and re-read for grammatical errors but except for that, it's fine. If you should like for me to proof read you article in more detail, don't hesitate to ask ^^
Choi_Minju-Nikka
#4
So long as you fix grammar & mistakes, as well as making sure iyt's not too bias, then it's okay ^^
Coldwhereyoustand
#5
That's great!!!
Some spelling mistakes and grammatical errors
But still amazing!!!
shineean
#6
For the second part of the first sentence, you should correct it as,
"One of SM Entertainment's best boy groups, SHINee, is one of those groups that have come so far."

That is all I have to say. Btw, it seems awesome! Lucky that you get to publish an article of SHINee into your school's newspaper XD