Story Title 2/5 Comment: It was an ok title but I don't think it helped it backed up the whole story.

Description or Forward 9/10 Comment: The description explained the story until the story got to the ending.

Chapter Title 2/5 Comment: All it said was the number of the chapter... Try making something that'll make it explain the chapter more!

Storyline 21/25 Comment: It was really sweet and explained a lot of what was going on.

Grammar and Spelling 18/20 Comment: There were a little spelling and grammar errors, other than that, I could understand the story well.

Originality 15/20 Comment: I can't say that I haven't read some stories that are similar to this one. But was truly a little different.

Characters 15/15 Comment: Great introductions on the characters!

Total 82/100