Not really sure how this works but uhh, I'd really appreciate constructive feedbacks on my first chapter. This is my first ever fanfic to be published publicly and I'm slightly unsure if it's ready or not. So uhh, hit me up in my dms? I don't have much, but I will be paying around 150-200kps!

Here's the link to my story btw. 

More details will be discussed through dms because I don't wanna spoil the plot lmao.