Reviewer: junhyung-lover

author: jokinglang

title: They are all gone.

Title (10/15) 
The title isn't bad albeit a little cliche. But good job nonetheless, titles are difficult (:

Appearance (4/5)
Poster can be improved on (: I do not get the connection between the poster and the fanfic.

Description/Forward (4/5)
It's fairly well done (: Nothing much to comment on (:

Characters (6/10)
Characters should have been further developed and better portrayed. You might want to try writing a longer fic next time as it's hard to develop your plot and characters in such a short fic.

Plot (6/15)
Plot can be improved, it was too short a fic. One shots are one shots but they should be long enough for one to develop the plot of the fic (:

Flow (6/15)
Flow is too abrupt. (Jang Mi just suddenly dies like that)

Grammar/Spelling (7/10)
A few grammatical and spelling mistakes here and there but it can be overlooked so no biggie (:

Originality(11/15)
Mostly original, some parts are cliche but it can't be avoided with all the fics going around. Not your fault! (: 

Did I Like It? (6/10)
A little longer would be good for both the plot development and your readers (:

Bonus (0/5)

Total (60/105)