Hello, long time no see.

I've been working on something, a book kind of. But I need help with continuing/finish it/see if it's okay and all that so I can send it to someplace where they publish books.... 
I haven't written everything, I've only done a few pages and the 1 and 2nd chapters are almost done and I've done some pages on other chapters and just a few lines on others. I have a general idea on what each chapter should be like, but I still don't know if the concept is good or bad. 
It's a monster/zombie/vampire/Alien kind of things that rules the world, and this girl Wendy lives isolated with her village under a huge glassdome that kind of protects them from these monsters they've heard from in these nightstories and such, but nevr seen more than a few times. She's not someone really accepted by "the leaders" of the dome and they hurt her 'cuz of it, but she has one friend and he loves her. He has a brother, that also likes her, and they all plan to escape and then they meet another group, and they start another journey kind of as a ed up family fighting the monsters that are drawn to her in some way she can't explain. One of the *hashtag* new members from this other group is called Peter, and he is the *hashtag* leader of the group and he calls them the lost boys, he reads them the book Peter Pan every night and when they meet Wendy, George and John he can't help but fall for her and she for him. SO THEY'RE LIKE MENT TO BE 'CUZ PETER AND WENDY. 

It's an edited and changed verison of my FOT (if you've ever read it before I deleted it) And TGC (that I too deleted) 

I don't know what to say more than what I've already said up there... 

But I hope I can get help, if you would like to read or something like help me, then contact me so I can send it / share it with you 

Thanx for reading this, I just don't know what to do.... If this is even worth writing I have no idea.... 

Me looking at this and then at my "book" with just 38 pages.....