C20 SM-TPM BETA COMMENTS (Candy!)

HEY THUUUUUR.

 

Okay! Chapter twenty! I made time for this, finally. Let me get started. By the way I still haven’t thought of the present yet… I seriously need to get started.

I have to compliment you on your horror writing skills. There was suspense all throughout this part, and even though Minho totally cracked me up, I knew there was going to be something more after that, and I was right, but the door being ajar and the knife!? That I didn’t expect. So, what? Leeteuk’s dead and the scream was… Taeyeon? I kinda wish he didn’t die though, because then, you know, broken TaeTeuk. Sigh.

So the scream was Leeteuk himself? Okay, okay. I’m not surprised Yoona wouldn’t be screaming and yelling like Luna, because first of all she’s probably seen lots of these things, considering she’s a detective and she solves murder cases too, and second, she’s not a girly girl  - she’s like, brave and all. Haha. Oh, and that MinYoon moment? I can really see it in a movie or a drama. It’s too epic and sweet for words.

These leaders… They’re driving me crazy, I swear. They’re driving everyone crazy. I mean Victoria’s supposed to be, like what Kyuhyun said, a good rebutter, but now her arguments don’t make sense, and Changmin’s just being an idiot. I wish they’d just apologize already… Without their good sense, the team can never solve anything properly. I pity Kyu, the middleman of this all. Watching it… watching it’s even worse than being in it. The frustration, the complication… the drama.

Whoa. Okay so Jinki isn’t completely bad. However, I still suspect him for something. As for the case itself, why do I have a feeling that female who was in the ward saw it happening - the knife and all - and the murderer had to escape without getting caught so he just kidnapped the female and left…? But if he entered by the main door there must be a witness. Someone must have seen him, right? And if the knife has blood as well… Was the female also stabbed? And why isn’t Leeteuk dead immediately? The only possibility is that the murderer didn’t stab it totally accurately so that he can still be alive… Gah, I’m not making any news. I’m just totally confused haha.

Oh my God no! Changmin and Victoria are getting worse… So now the issue at hand is jealousy toward Victoria because she’s taking up the role of the leader when he’s supposed to be the rightful one? I hope brilliant Kyu comes up with some kind of solution or this is just going to go back and forth and back and forth and the arguments will never end! Back to the case, Taeyeon probably knows Onew because he’s her husband’s doctor, so no surprise with the informalities there. I still suspect Onew though. Fishy… fishy… very fishy…

I love that little part you included about Kyuhyun. And that line especially - a lot more than just the ordinary geek - it’s so true. I mean Kyuhyun isn’t just good with his studies and high IQ and all, to be in this line - detective work, you have to have more than brains. Honestly, I kinda cracked up with the ChangToria, because they remind me of me when I was younger. I always had fights with my brother, and we’d ask our cousins to take sides. We still have fights, but it’s not that childish anymore. Oh, and if Changmin thinks that Victoria’s being like a little kid, him asking Yoona to be on his side also shows that he’s as immature as Victoria is. I’m very disappointed with Changmin, honestly - very disappointed. But MinYoonKyu… They make me smile. I mean no matter what these three are always together. Sure, they fight, but in the end these three stick up for each other. I hope Changmin and Victoria get back together soon. Sigh.

Aw, that’s so adorable. We haven’t seen much of YoonKyu interacting, it’s usually KyuToria. I love how the perspectives of both of them, what they think of each other, have changed. I actually absolutely adore how Yoona was able to tell Kyuhyun that he’s wrong without really criticizing him and all. Also, even though Kyuhyun seems to be so… right, this just shows us that he has opinions, his own views on things and he tends to let that affect him.

Overall, this chapter was a good insight to the older team members’ personality, and a second part to the start of this case. Good job, as usual. Oh and by the way I noticed this chapter was shorter than usual. Haha. Whatever it is, I loved it. :)

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candyredhearts
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Thank you so much for the beautiful comment <3
it's so beautiful ;~;
you work too hard ;~;