hmm I would say to move the 'queensabelle/wgf' and 'kodakious' (not sure if that's what it says; it's a little unclear) somewhere else since both are kind of just randomly there without much organization, but the rest of the text has nice placement.
And the streak of light red/orange through his face is a little bit random/though it does enhance the poster, I would say that if you blended it better, it definitely would've looked smoother and more reasonable, kinda like lighting? Right now, it's kinda like a fuzzy block that randomly begins and stops, so I would definitely either stretch it out so that it covers the entire vertical right side of the poster so that it fits the rest of the poster better and completes the composition/effect or blend it out smoother so it looks like light.
I like how there's that film effect that runs along both sides of the poster too, but it would've been cool if you tilted the two people so that it was parallel with the film because that would've been a nice touch and made it seem more... idk, uniform? I also get that you made the film squares (not sure what to call that LOL) on the right side semi-transparent so that it didn't cover his face, though I would've still made them solid to create that symmetrical effect. I love the colors though. I have a soft spot for dusty orange. <3 and the film grain/scattered grunge ahhh
but this is definitely better than whatever I can make right now and in the near future hahahaha. /sweats
random suggestions from a random passerby :D
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