Well, I did this to 2 of my other fanfics.

But unlike those, I actually finished this fanfic.

Just like I did with the others, I'm going to reread chapter 1 of this fanfiction.

 

But let me first talk about this fanfiction. 

I originally wrote two of these chapters in my native language on my Word document. So this first chapter is pretty much a translated version of something I wrote on Word.

I started this fanfiction in 2012 and ended it in 2014. Even though I didn't use a lot of time to make this.

I actually tagged this as "kyumin", even though it wasn't a , where Kyuhyun and Sungmin end up dating or having feelings for each others. The ship sinked BTW.

How I got this story idea is that I looked at Super Junior's y, Free and Single teaser photos on their website. I suddenly put Sungmin's and Kyuhyun's picture together, and then the story idea happened.

I also made a poster back then, but I couldn't share them.

I know that this poster is very badly made. I freaking used Paint for this. I didn't have any fancy photoshop thing. (And I still don't)

So instead of this poster I have this:

Nothing wrong with the poster. Ayomie did a great job on making this, but I personally liked my ugly poster made with Paint a bit more.

 

But let me talk about the description, before I talk about chapter 1.

 

The Descriction:

Everyone like to sleep and need to sleep.

But what if you or someone you knew couldn't sleep?

Or slept and never woke up?

What would you do?

 

Kyuhyun can't sleep and Sungmin can't wake up, why?

 

This does sound a bit cheesy. But this is pretty much the plot.

 

Then the foreword.

 

The Foreword:

Hello everybody, this is the first time i translate one of my stories, this one was originaly in my own language and i haven't sent that version of it on this website. This sounds like I translated all the chapters, but I only translated two of the chapters.

this is brotherly love and girlxboy love, not . I wouldn't be surprised if I had written this after seeing comments of people thinking that this one is .

And that random girl, Kateu, who always is in my stories is there too. I'm cringing and having horrible Mary sue character flashback. I'm glad that she was only a very minor character and was less Mary Sue-ish in this story.

 

Now I'm going to talk about chapter 1, that i wrote.

I am not going to put the entire chapter there.

 

Strawberry Milk not a too bad title.

Kyuhyun is laying in his bed dreaming that he is a knight and fights against monsters from Starcraft. when he is finished fighting all those monsters, he sees a castle, where the princess is trapped. I have never played or seen anyone play that game, so I don't know how the monsters look like. But this is surposed to be a fairytale dream.

He gets in to the castle and sees Seohyun in princess clothes and tiara. Her hands are in chains. He takes his sword and tries to break the chains, but then a big monster comes who looks like Yonghwa in his face. Kyuhyun fights him, but the monster hits him on the head and he wakes up. "Looks like Yonghwa in his face" Does this sentence make sense to you? 

In the bed right next to his, there is Sungmin sleeping like a stone. If you are Faroese, it is easy to see that it is translated. This is a thing that Faroese people actually say. "Svevur sum ein steinur".

The knight sees that Sungmin is smiling. Writing "knight" just to sound so freaking author-ish.

"I guess he is dreaming about pumpkins." he thinks. "but why was i dreaming about her? She has Yonghwa." Why the heck does he sound so serious thinking that Sungmin dreams about pumpkins? And also "She has Yonghwa.", it just sounds weird. I could have written "she is dating Yonghwa" or "she has Yonghwa as a boyfriend."

He goes to the frigde to get some milk, but then he sees that  Eunhyuk has put almost a hundred bottles of strawberry milk in the frigde. The misspelling of fridge LOL. And seriously, that sounds pretty expensive 100 bottles of strawberry milk, how rich is Eunhyuk even? Yup, this is the reason why this chapter is called that.

He takes all the bottles of the fridge and open them. then he puts sardines in each bottle, then he close them and put them again in the frigde. Did I just actually spell it correct? And then I misspelled it again. Weirdest prank ever.

"This is what happens to monkeys, if the make evil maknaes angry." he says to himself with an evil smile. More fan jokes.

"Yah Kyuhyun ssi! what is so funny? everybody have morninghair." This is said by Eunhyuk. I used to write in the cringy koreaboo way, where there is suddenly Korean words in it. I wrote morninghair instead of morning hair, because in my country some words are compounded that way.

"Kyuhyun ssi, what have you done to my milk?" he shouts so loud, that he wakes everyone in Super Junior. He poors the milk over Kyuhyun head. "You baboya." I'm laughing too hard at baboya.

All of the Super Junior members, two cats and a turtle are in the kitchen and see Eunhyuk and Kyuhyun. Baengsin the strawberry, which was lying on the floor. Why the heck is are their pets also there? Baengsin the strawberry milk, not a strawberry.

"I love fish, but it taste discusting together with sardines. Are really that bad cook, Kyuhyun?" Said by Donghae. More fan jokes.

"Because i want to have a bath in it, just like Kleopatra." Eunhyuk wants to bath in strawberry milk. That is pretty weird. And Cleopatra name is spelled wrong, but I actually spelled this the Faroese way, because we don't have the letter "c" in the alphabet.

Everyone are looking at Eunhyuk like he has a mental illness. Uhm... I would not written that now a days. Mental illnesses are serious.

Author note: sorry it took so long, but i hope you don't have troubles with sleeping. Sorry it took too long? Did I update this chapter long after I made the description and foreword? I kind of get why I said this part with sleeping, but it just sounds weird.

 

Well, this is the first chapter of the fanfic, that actually got completed unlike some other fanfiction, that I wrote.

The thing that happens in the story doesn't happen yet.

But in the story Sungmin suddenly sleeps and doesn't wake up.

And Kyuhyun can't sleep. (I didn't know much about imsomnia back then, and I don't think that I said that he had it.)

I do like the storyline a bit, but I guess that I didn't write it very well. The chapters were only first draft.

I will not spoil the ending, but I think that I rushed the ending and just wanted to finish this story.

But I think that some readers actually liked my story. Or they actually wrote that in the comments. I don't know if they were serious or actually being fake positive.

 

For some reasons, I suddenly want someone to review it and give me an honest review of the story. But I guess that the reviewer would feel torture, if that person read it.