Moments no more

I never thought that you'd leave so soon

When I saw you waving goodbye;

 I feel my eyes tingling,

The tears started welling in my eyes;

And they started to fall drop by drop.

Pain and anger surged across my heart;

Why do you have to leave me alone In this state?

 I felt bitter towards life;

Nothing would be the same without you-

Without the sunshine of your smile,

Your gaiety and happiness that sets my heart at ease;

Without the beauty of your voice,

It will never be the same. 

I sit here alone, feeling sorry for myself,

Disillusioned with life; 

Also thinking about the moments that last no more.

The things I had, I've lost them sure.

Drives me mad, there's just no cure. 

I am thinking about you,

My gem, who has gone away from me.

In this quest, you lie in my heart of pain;

My heart, which has torn me apart.

Don't know how I shall survive

Because I want those past moments to live.

My eyes dry, red and swollen!

My heart is bleeding,refusing to stop

It has broken into a thousand pieces...

Now, here I am sitting, isolated,

Not wanting to come to the reality of life...

Not wanting to face the hard truth:

That you have left.

So, here I am, thinking about

The moments that last no more...

Hello guys! So, this is just a simple free verse poem... I posted this on my blog since I wanted feedbacks and points on how to improve one's writing skills. This is actually my best friend's and she is quite insecure about her way of writing. Can you please comment to let me know how you think about this? You don't really have to but i'd appreciate it if you did. She says that she'll stop writing poems since she does not find them good.... and I'm not lying. Ignore everything posted here if you think so.