Comments on the 1st prompt drabble challenge

i say, all the authors did a wonderful job... it amazes me how a one sentence can be viewed by many differently... though i didn't really know some of the characters in other stories, i could say that i enjoy reading it... when a person starts reading a new otp and he/she fell in love with that otp... it means that the story and plot is really good(good job for the authors for making you a shipper.. xD or the otp is just to hard not ship because they're cute or somehow you got attracted to their situation or scenarios... as a reader this happen quite a few times to me... and it really amazes me how the author can make me a shipper without finding out why they ship the couple... my point here is that some of the drabbles are really really good and it almost make me a shipper of the couple... xD for me it's really hard to read stories that you're not interested but this drabbles kind of help me enjoy pairings that i dont like... xD

P.S.: im saying sorry for the authors who would be offended by my comments/opinions. i dont want a miscommunication. xD i promote peace! xD hahaha

Comments per Drabble

Entry 1: i'm not familiar with the characters but what i like about is that it is the fact that someone is watching over you, wanting to take all your pain and asking you to be selfish just for this time. and the drabble is much more cooler because of the plot and the characters, a doctor and an angel?

Entry 2: i like the fact that the girl loves or doesnt hate his flaws or his pains, that she thought that it was necessary in his life because they would never be in each others' side. i like the her statement "The pain, the darkness? They’re the key." it's somehow depressing because of the feeling of pain but it presents that not always sad/bad things are bad/wrong things. because somehow it makes you stronger. the first part of the drabble seems dark but i like their cuteness in the end. and you showed some of the characters' strong personality for such a limited words.

Entry 3: all I could say is wow! I guess you are a very good writer… I mean how is that even possible… your drabble is so deep or I’m just stupid not to understand the whole plot of the story… while I was reading it I felt like it is from some literature/books that’s been published… I think for me to understand more of the drabble, it should be made an ongoing story or at least a one shot… is it metaphor? Or is it a fantasy? What I like about the plot is the longingness, and loneliness but when the speaker’s path crossed path with the other he found his purpose his meaning and even though they’ll cross paths a few times it is enough for the speaker to live, to move forward in life… It reminds me of the two lines who intersect once… it’s like it is enough that once in their life they met… it’s a pity though… xD anyway, in summary it’s wow and deep! xD

Entry 4: not a fan of the pairing but I still enjoy reading it… what I like about is that it gives us a glimpse of their life on how they slowly progress in their relationship… I just don’t get why the other needs to go meet jongin and something in their meeting didn’t go well and if chanyeol and baek is really in a relationship… because the other one feels like he loves the other even if he’s chasing another person… it feels like it is an angst story but in the end it becomes light… I like this because personally I like people who ties to break down ur walls even though u tried to push him away… it’s a nice drabble… in short I like ur character… xD

Entry 5: the feel of this drabble is a little bit different from the first four… it has more lines which is your writing style and I laugh, I mean I smile from beginning to the end… xD I really don’t know the characters but the drabble is kind of funny for me… It makes me smile… short? xD I guess for me what’s lacking is I cant find any take away from it, I mean the lesson or content but this is a free drabble and if you enjoy writing it, I’m sure readers would enjoy reading it too!

Entry 6: I love this drabble! I love how you creatively write how the sun and moon meet and when they meet they produce solar eclipse it’s beautiful but it’s not for the greater good of the many, so they should still separate… it really emphasize that no matter how beautiful a thing is and how wonderful it is if it can hurt/harm others, we should be content in just looking or at least meeting a few times maybe someday, hopefully they can be finally together… another thing is that no matter how far you are with each other as long as you know that he/she loves you it can be enough… xD it amazes me how the story flowed and how you created the plot! It’s different I hope I can read more or ur fics! xD

Entry 7: the plot is very simple… it’s not like the first ones… just a simple love story but what I like the most out of this drabble is the flashback… I’m a er for flashbacks stories… xD and also the conversation of the characters… xD but what I like the most out of their conversation is the last line… it’s a good way to end the conversation and the story… it’s like boom! xD hahaha

Entry 8: it’s not my cup of tea… xD unicorns and all… xD plus I don’t really know who are the characters… I mean I hear the name L. Joe but I’m unfamiliar with the other character… but I really like the imagination of the authors who wrote fantasy like this… because how can they describe it beautifully they didn’t see those… hands down for your wild imagination…

Entry 9: Not really a shipper of these two because I’m a taengsic shipper! xD but I really love plots like this… xD one’s mentally disabled and one who tries to help the other character to get through with it, to heal the other character… the plot reminds me of a taeny story “mad love” by unniesone it got featured… xD it’s either ur the author… xD or ur a fan of that ff… but what I like in the story is that tiff’s a doctor and tae’s the patient and they’re each other’s fiancée… I’m just curious though, is it okay for a doctor to take care of a patient who is part of his/her family? Anyway their story is sad because tae’s have an illness… this is heartbreaking in real life… anyway, I really like the story!

Entry 10: the first few paragraphs, give me the feels that the other character is a special person to Luna… could be a lover but it my instinct tells me that it is her brother… xD then as the drabble progress I realized that the other character was blind… so you know I’m kind of awww… why does the author have to make him/her blind it adds up to the pain that he’s feeling… and the moment where the other charcter is feeling Luna’s face it was touching but the ending was really really disturbing… cutting the ears? What? Did Luna get him blind too? Oh.eem.gee. but it’s twisted but you got your readers hooked up… I’m hooked up… I kind of want it to have a sequel or a oneshot…

Entry 11: shouldn’t it be “You better be.” Rather than “You had better.” ? xD anyway it still depends on the writing style of the author but as a reader I find it awkward to read… xD anyway, I like this kind of story, a story of two people not sure if they can find/love each other again because of the situation they’re in… they need to separate not because of the parents of this or another third party but the situation itself… it’s like they love each other, it’s the right person but unfortunately they live in a time wherein they cant love each other, do you get what I mean? Hahaha anyway it’s a good story but I hate the ending… xD it’s because I’m a er for tragic endings… but hey it’s your story and you love the way it is I’m sure there are lots of people wanted an ending like you did… it’s just me… hahaha

Entry 12: it’s a great story! I love this kind of plot! Hahaha… but I really like reading conversations among the characters so I kind of somehow bored specially I’m not interested in the pairing… maybe if it’s another pairing or a paring that I really really like I’ll cry that’s how good your story is…

Entry 13: heol, I’m a topfany shipper… xD I wish it is a topfany ff… hahaha so I imagine the other character to be tiff but it didn’t work out… xD hahaha anyway I really like a love story that is unrequited… xD and how TOP confessed to dae and how he said that he doesn’t need to answer TOP, he’ll just be there for him… though it is unfair to TOP because he will fall in love with dae deeply…. Anyway I like the last sentence…

Entry 14: I wish this drabble is gtae… xD I know I’m delusional but hey it’s just a ff… let me at least be happy in just reading gtae… xD anyway, the story is good, it’s almost a rated m… xD gdragons ff are mostly like that… hahaha what I really love about this is the last paragraph… it gives you feels that even though you’re not worthy you cannot run away from that love might as well embrace it… xD

Entry 15: train to busan? xD hahaha it reminds me of the scene of the two high school lovers in train to busan… when the girl gets bitten the boy never let her go… he might die as well… at least they’re together… don’t really know the pairing but when I imagine it as part of the movie, I can finally relate… xD I really love this lines: “One kiss, I love you. Two kisses, I love you forever. The boy in Yoongi’s arms convulses and stiffens. A bite on his neck, forever and ever.”

Entry 16: huhuhu… my heart gets broken… xD I’m still not over the dating news but that’s reality… I’m a big hyukstal shipper… you know lee bona and yoon chan young? The heirs? They’re the reason why I get in to kpop… huhuhu… anyway, the story is really really good… even I don’t like the pairing I want to know what will happen… I hope if it becomes a story… they’ll be just friends… hahaha… I’m still a big hyukstal shipper even if they already sunk… xD I like how she’s scared on her own and scared that there’s a wolf but when she realized that she’s familiar with that eyes and the way the last part ends… the way she say his name… it’s a good cliffhanger… xD

Entry 17: at first reading, I don’t really understand what happen… but after reading it again… I think I grasp the story… xD this is one of the endings that I really like… in the middle part it gives the feels that suga would let her live but the end says otherwise or I just only misunderstand it… I mean the last sentence can be a metaphor or she is truly dead… anyways, well done! xD

Entry 18: this is really a drabble… xD I mean it can stand alone that if ur not really a shipper of these two you’re contented but for a shipper they’ll want more chapter of this… after all this is just a start of their love/friend story… xD what I like about it is the characters… I mean I’m a er for characters who are disabled… I mean if you the two characters are abled and yet they have a lot of love problems how much more if the other character is disabled how can love blossomed from this situation…

Entry 19: I don’t understand that much maybe because I’m not interested in the pairing but the characters conversation it got me hooked up… xD specially when the other character said that “When I see you… I’m okay” it gives me chills… in a good way… just as long as the other is there everything will be alright… the last line I really imagined it and it was beautiful… xD

Bonus: I really like the plot… I mean it’s idol AU who wouldn’t love that… xD but I wish it is gtae hahaha… good job author! I don’t think you need my opinion xD u have lot of stories and many people are reading it… xD so just keep up the good work! Fighting author! xD

I really have fun reading all drabbles! i hope that you find my comments/opinion a help to your stories... xD good job authors!

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fefedove
#1
like YuYuan below, i'm also a writer, so thank you for these comments! ^_^
-Yuan-
#2
thank you for commenting all of the drabbles ;)
as one of the writer, I of course was curious what you thought about it