Title: Back To Square One

Author: shashashy

Characters: Jeon Jungkook || Minatozaki Sana

Genres: Romance, Slight Angst

Description :

Before college and paper works, Minatozaki Sana was the perfect girl. She was a role model to students and the teachers had grown fond her. But that all changed when she found herself breaking school rules just to communicate with the notorious delinquent Jeon Jungkook.

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Review:

Title [5/5] 

In searching for a story, if your story ever appears, the title catches quite an attention- meaning to say that your title is a certified eye candy!

Description & Foreword [8/10]I was wondering if you can add a few more words? I was looking for something that can catch the readers' attention, I need more allure in this section. Settling this thought aside, it wasn't really that bad. It's precise and detailed, and it's not very confusing. I just need more of that 'attractiveness' factor.

Plot [19/20]
I like how the plot went like. It wasn't that complicated or dramatic and is just simple, but that simplicity just made it more exquisite.
 

Flow [15/15]
The flow is steady and good- it fits the theme of the story since you went for a slow one. You didn't took huge leaps and that's good. It is very clear and natural.
 

Characterization [14/15]
Though I think the story is awesome, I just can't go on without thinking how common the traits of your characters are. Despite of that though, I like how you kept your characters running the whole story with the right details and flow.
 

Grammar [11/15]
Your grammar is very good, I just had a few problems here and there, but I'm sure a proofread would do the trick. I had a problem with the awkward phrasings, especially with Jungkook's diction. There was no need to use deep words when it doesn't fit the theme of the scene or the character. There were other words that were commonly used and it irked me since you could have used synonyms. There were a few typos here and there, but I'm sure you can fix it with a proofread, as I've said earlier. Aside from that, there was not much problem. I assume that a double-check (as I said earlier) in every chapter would do the trick. You have the potential to make your words more exquisite, remember that.
 

Overall enjoyment [20/20]
I enjoyed the story very much. The interactions of the characters were very delightful to read. The story especially had an effect on me at the letter Jungkook wrote. In my perspective, that ending made the story carry itself in a newer and higher level.
 

Total Score: [92/100]