WHY HELLO THERE.

So who would’ve thought that I’m back again? I decided to, since I really couldn’t wait for the next chapter and be behind again, plus I have time today. I didn’t really expect to be able to do this, but since I’m here… Let’s begin, shall we?

Wait, who’s talking into the phone? That is the phone, right? That’s what it’s supposed to represent, those two ? Okay, whatever it is, it’s so mysterious…

Oh, Lee Gunwoo. The message. Right. Dude, don’t tease me! What picture is it that made Minho so shocked and Victoria so… enlightened? Oh and by the way, I love how Minho shuts up when Victoria gets increasingly annoyed. He should be more sensitive though, just listen to her. That would help, instead of going around all over the place trying to understand what Victoria’s doing.What is that?

Aw, that part where he looks into her eyes and firmly tells her that she can’t take care of herself; it’s so intense yet so sweet at the same time. Makes my heart melt. It’s amazing how you can make every pairing that has Yoona fit so well together. I love MinYoon, but you’ve got me shipping YoonWoo too! Gosh. “His life centered so much on her, which scared him yet she was the only thing he yearned for in his life.” That line’s a little confusing. Is there a grammar error somewhere, or is it just me? Either way, it’s so profound. Pretty much this whole story’s so profound, each part overlapping the other, complicating, then unraveling when it reaches the end. And this is the end of case two, right? Can’t wait for the end!

Wait, guns? Oh yeah, baby. It’s gonna get dangerous. (Or is it?)

It’s so cool how you always make all of them gather at the scene and somehow, everything comes together. Although, you always seem to make Yoona the main lead. Like even though Victoria has a ton of the information, and Changmin’s the actual leader of the team, Yoona’s always the one who surprises everyone by coming out with all her conclusions, stepping forward with all of what she believes is true, which usually is, when it comes to the end. It’s a great closure, also, about Suzy and how Jiyoung, Seyong all care for her. Thinking that she’s always been alone, thinking that no one really loves her, but actually, she doesn’t realize the people that are around her now. She just keeps looking at the past, keeps wanting Minho and Minho only. And… I finally understand Seyong now. He’s… wow. He’s really… I have no words. It’s such a great closure. But she’ll go to jail, right? Or wait, she’ll be prosecuted. Right? The death sentence…

Kyuhyun’s gonna clear everything up? I hope they tell her that Gunwoo’s Geon. I mean, it’s a pity if she doesn’t know, with what he’s done with her and all. For her, I mean. And the sacrifices… Even though he’s a suspect he still tries his best to help her… Ack. Gunwoo… I’d really love to have him as a friend. Best friend. Childhood friend. Lover. Whatever. You make him so… desirable in this fic. I hope he’ll have another cameo. Actually, I think I’ll have a list of people I hope make a cameo. OMG. It’d be so awesome if you made a case just for me! (My wishful thinking, OTL.)

Girl, you just wrote the best memorial scene I’ve ever read in my life. The detail, the wind that caressed his face, the girl who appeared next to him (of which, I assume is Krystal, but haha I’m not very sure), the thoughts, short sweet sentences but bring out so much, his apology, his declaration that he’ll move on… It’s all so painfully beautiful. I don’t ship at all, but the way you make them… It’s just so beautiful. Leaves me breathless, how it starts off with all the angst, then there’s fluff, her dark circles that have lifted…

A painful goodbye. Minho’s goodbye, then Yoona’s goodbye. In a sense, Gunwoo’s goodbye, since he’s the only one out of the two that knows—remembers everything that’s happened between them. I absolutely loved this. I mean, there’s her little surprise when she enters, and then Gunwoo’s feelings displayed when he calls for a truce. I wish you could write an alternate ending to this case, where you know, maybe Gunwoo ends up with Yoona. That’d be sweet, but you already have so much on your plate; I don’t want to push you further. And oh, the last part. “I’d like that.” So cute! I can’t even…

Brother-sister, eh? Because Changmin’s got Vic. Hehe. ChangToria shipper will ship ChangToria like she should. By the way, I love how Sulli masks her sadness about Suzy with a bright smile, making herself happy and bouncy again… Reminds me a little of Minho. Well, they are siblings after all. This chapter has a lot of very pretty little wrap-ups. I love them. Not that they surprise me about how good they are. You’re good at these things. I’m not surprised at all. Talented writers will be talented. ;D

Huh. You confuse me. The last part. It’s more complex as it seems to be? You’re hinting at something else here, aren’t you? And you fit Kyuhyun’s awesomeness into this chapter! I’m glad. It’s sad that he hardly gets in on the action, he just does all the BTS work, but he’s okay with it. Honestly, I can’t imagine myself like that. I love getting credit for what I do. (OTL, this sounds so…) Mommy Song and Kyuhyun. I like that. They’d make a kick- duo. Brains and brawns. BOOM. Epic duo.

Gnaw. Changmin and his kill-joy personality. Haha, but that’s what a leader does. I love how they all randomly pop up when Minho does. They’re all amazing. And “something that a good barista would know”… Yoona of course, is a good barista. I love how you included the part where Minho’s not in the past, he’s now in the present. He has to move on… and with Yoona. Hehe. I’m a happy shipper. I shall wait for more cute moments. Have some kisses along the way. Intense ones. (Drifting away here…) SM-5 all the way, indeed! This chapter—no, this case was great. Oh, and I just remembered, what about ChangToria’s quarrel in the earlier part of the chapter(s)? Oh… You’re using it for the later chapters… I see. Drama, drama, drama. MinYoon’s not in love. Aw. Sigh. I wish they were. They should be. They’d be good together. I’ve obviously said this probably a million times already. OTL. But it’s true, they are good together. Make this end with MinYoon, eh? For me? :)

Beta, out!