1. Poster (5/10)

-  First off, there is no poster. I gave half the marks because well, it is a one-shot which is short so not using a poster is fine:)

2. Title (3/10)

- I don't really get why it is related to the story. If i was the author, I'll put the title as maybe "Broken Promises" instead of "Goodbye Mr Wrong Hello Mr Right"! but the title is catchy in a way:)

3. Plot (8/15)

- The plot was fine on the whole but since it is a one shot, i think  it might be a little fast. Like, you were talking about Hyunseung cheating on you then suddenly one year later, Dongwoon falls in love with you. i think you need to elaborate more on what happened in that one year.

4. Spelling and Grammar (15/20)

- not much spelling errors on the whole except for the usual HyunSeung and DongWoon. You didn't add aprostrophes too in you're - don't

5. Prologue/Trailer/Character Introduction (5/15) 

- You could have elaborated more on the description and you didn't bother to write a foreword.

6. Flow of the story (7/10)

- I think the ending was a littl abrupt but it's fine:)

7. Overall Enjoyment (16/20)

- It's a really sweet story and i enjoyed it:) 

Reviewer Remarks: 

-Okay^^ so, sorry for being a little harsh with the comments>< i think you need to improve on the storyline and the story flow. those 2 are the keys to the perfect story! hwaiting!

Total: 59/100