Construct Thy Criticisms

 

I get it that I'm a total klutz and that I make a lot of mistakes and I totally can't catch up as fast as you guys do- but if you're going to correct me, make sure you're perfect.

No offense, but nobody's perfect. I'm sensitive to tears, I was lucky that I didn't explode into floods of tears earlier. At first, I can still laught it out just so you guys wouldn't noticed, but is that called simply helping? Well, I think that's critiscism. It's okay to criticise, but please, you're in high school, by now you probably know how to construct your freaking critiscism! 

I have feelings too! To tell me to straighten up and don't be afraid when I have fast reflexes and I crawl into a ball whenever something's about to hit me is totally irrevelant. You guys yourself are making the same mistakes.

Just correcting me? Just helping me? Is it just "just"?! What the hell?! If you were a wind, then Im a freaking cloud! You can blow me by the minute!

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ashkhen #1
People should know there is a limit to certain things and as they get older they should know when not to use it.