Or actually I'm reading both chapter 1 and Desciption and Foreword

But well... I'm ELFantasyhand and I'm just trying this thing, where I'm making a blog where I'm reacting to old fanfics I have written, I'm starting with my first fanfic written on this site.

And for you, you don't know who Heebum is, it's Heechul's cat.

"a cute heebum story"? I could have called this fanfic something else, but it is one of the few fanfics where kpop pets are main characters and have love interests.

 

The Description:

The description is short and simple.

"Heechul is at the army and will not come back again until 2 years. while he is at the army, Donghae takes care of Heebum for him , because he is heechul's favourite dongsaeng."​ Now I think about it, who actually took care of Heebum, when he was in the army?

"Bada just had puppies together with Choco. Donghae and Eunhyuk decide to sell them to the ELF.(you want a puppy?)" Fork it, I once made a competion or something, where you could be the person, who got one of the puppies. It is a really embarrassing memory. And I doubt if they would ever give their fans puppies.

"Ddangkoma is in love in Heebum, but Heebum says that turtles and cats can't date eath other" In real life no such thing would happen. but

"Ddangkoma still loves him, but doesn't show that and sometimes bites him. (yes, turtles can bite.)" Oh my goodness, everyone knows that turtles can bite. I can't believe I wrote that.

"Heebum begins to dislike her and sometimes tries to bite her and scratch her, but it never works. (because turtle have shields.)"​ Uhm... shields? seriously?

"One day when heebum goes out for a walk, he meets Kiara..." Kiara was actually the name of a cat I had.

"excited?" Uhm.. excited for what?

 

The Foreword:

 

"this is my first english fanfiction and i'm not so good at english." English is my third language after Faroese and Danish.

 

hope you gonna like it. 

"BTW while i wrote this foreword i found a really funny cat video. want to watch. here is the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oKI-tD0L18A&feature=related here is a funnier version of this video, which made me laugh my head of (OMO if i lost my head, i would be dead. LOL that rimed.): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hNePpViMzJM&feature=fvwrel " *facepalming* this is not how you make a foreword. And it was actually two Nononono cat videos

"BTW my non-kpop fan friend, who only knows Psy and G Dragon ( i don't know if she knows his name, but she only know him as the crayon guy.) said to me that she would be reading this.

and before she starts reading. I will give her a GIF.

CRAYONS FOR YOU, UNNIE." She only read the first chapters and said that it was hard to understand. Well... I was reading a fanfic of a show, I don't know much about I would totally feel the same.

 

Chapter 1:

 

"Baco [A/N: LOL sounds like bacon] "​ Did I freaking put a Author Note in the freaking title?

 

""I wonder, who the father is." Donghae says."Yeah, me too." he says and kisses the puppy. "Maybe it is Choco."It may be, if it is, then this is our grandchildren." they both laugh." that part is kind of cute.

""Maybe we should make boshintang out of them."  Donghae says, while his teeth." Oh my goodness, what the heck?

 

"If you wonder what Boshintang is. It's dogsoup. Not soup for dogs, but soup made of dogs. I guess your all like this O_O or :O Not only chinese people eat dogs, koreans too." I know now that eating dogs is not as usual in South Korea than I thought back then. I feel so bad for writing this.

 

And done. And it was very interesting, but also cringeworthy. I will do chapter 2, if I get at least one comment.