i already posted this b4 but i got no feedback so i'm posting it again XD

I said I would do either the Momo story of the E.co story, but Imma put them both up and whichever one is more popular i'll probably end up updating more often.

So, for the E.co story:

 

First, let's start with a poll, shall we? ;)

 

So, this is my idea, and what I want to prevent.

E.co is a fashion designer, and is very dedicated at it. He takes it seriously- very seriously. He doesn't like working with other people, but he can easily cooperate with his close friend G-Dragon.

Okay, I will use their real names cuz it would sound silly otherwise, no? XD So Ha JoonYoung and Kwon JiYong

His rival is Key, or Kim Kibum. Kibum also has a very nice taste in fashion, so they tend to have a lot of friction. The thing is, JoonYoung tries to get to the top by his work, and Kibum will do whatever it takes, even if it means violence.

But~ that's not all.

There will be a female OC, who is working for JoonYoung as a model because she can't get any other job for lack of experience and charm.

Problem: I don't want E.co to become the tsundere type.

He needs to be strict for work, but I don't like stories that have the tsundere type. Well, I do, but they irritate me, and it irritates me even more when the girl still falls for the jerk face like "Oh, I know he has love inside. And he's cute, anyways." unfortunately I'm that girl so WWWWAAAAAAAEEEEE?!

So yeah :P

 

So, questions:

Should I make him strict at work and really cool and chill outside of work? Or is tsundere cool for his personality? (even tho i'll be upset while writing it cuz tsundere doesn't even exist irl XD you're either tsuntsun or deredere amiright)

Should it be in first person from the OC or third person? If it's first person, we can only see what she sees. But if it's third person, we can cut to any scene with any character.

umm... I can't think of anymore questions XD

Well, if you have any ideas or questions, comment plz

san-kyuu

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daejae-bap #1
For point of view I think third person cos I always live to see what's happening with all the characters instead of just one.

...Sorry this is the only question I have an answer to lol