Poem 003


Hello everyone! 

Firstly I wanted to thank everyone who supported me in my last blog post. 

It helped me a lot. Honestly I feel relaxed and happy. 

So thank you so much! :) 

Today work for me was hectic and in my free I wrote down ideas and in the end

put it into a poem, I hope you like it. 

Please let me know what you guys think! :)


Broken

 

She was his sunshine,

Only for a matter of time.

 

She was the smile on his face,

Now left between them was eternal space.

 

She was his warmth during winter,

Even the summer breeze now brings him shivers without her.

 

Her smell to him was of freshly bloomed orchards in a meadow,

The only thing close to him now was his very own dark shadow.

 

Her shoulder was where he would always cry,

Now he laid in bed stiffened holding his tears inside.

 

They met everyday, so often as if they were partners in crime,

Yet now he would only go see her from time to time.

 

He wished for her to be happy without him,

Still he would imagine her by his side like a phantom limb.

 

Wind blew past him with force as if she was calling his name,

Her voice echoed in his head breaking his manly frame.

 

Tears rolled down his cheeks, knowing it was time to release,

Forever she will live in his heart that prays for her, may she rest in peace.


What do you guys think? :) 

Would love to read your comments! 

P.S: If you do not know what a phantom limb is, it is when you have surgery and you had to have a limb or bone or organ removed, and even though it is gone, you still feel and think it is there in its spot. So even though the girl is no longer with him, the guy still feels and thinks she is. I hope that clarrifies things. :) Any other questions, let me know, will be glad to answer them. 

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youseememeseeyou
#1
your poem is really beautiful i must say. reminds me of a friend lmao.

p/s ; write more poem jsy! :D

p/s : a happy one.
hellobts1003 #2
Why do I feel sad when I read the last part..? I love poems and finally I found another poems and I really really lovely ^^
sleepingprince
#3
Hi author shi . Do u like write poem? I noticed that you wrote quite alot.